User blog:Patchfeather14/Talonfang Plot

Okay, so as you see, I've decided Talonfang will be evilish because she's cooler that way.

So, I'm just going to copy and paste my idea from my To-do-list


 * Okay, I know I said no to her being evil 'n crap but i love her more when she's murderous. So, with that being said, maybe, she does have a curse (like i like her to have...) but it starts to leave it's mark older than six moons? (it was supposed to start at six moons but whateva) so maybe, since she's fourteen moons now, it'll start when she's twenty? she needs a mate by twenty moons then, because


 * So, she does have minor bits of her dumb curse showing er whatever so she has anger issues (she had those anyway but still). Some sucker befriends her and helps her out then they fall in love and become mates.


 * But here's the fun part! She murders him! yay! or he leaves her (that'll be talked about with the dudes owner) but wait - theres more. She has his kids after he dies. She hands them off to some other queen in fear she'll hurt them.


 * So she decides to never tell the Clan she's their real mom because she doesn't want to be questioned on why she can't just take care of them.


 * Skip, skip, skip, small details, skip, takes time being the best warrior she can, along with killing, skip, skip.


 * Then she starts to go crazy and likes killing. all i've got so far.


 * Her curse:
 * So she is cursed. I need to find out how, why, and all that crap. It'll most likely be on Lavaspark's side of the family. Anyway, someone cursed her. Maybe a DF cat who hated her mom? That sounds interesting... Her curse is she hurts and kills cats against her will. Something takes over, and her normal self is trying to fight, trying to stop herself, but her curse won't allow it, so she's forced to kill.


 * The curse also wills her to become high ranking, to become top warrior, deputy, then leader. At all costs. She, of course, does desire such ranks, but she would never kill for them, but her curse makes her, and she soon starts to enjoy tormenting cats, and her curse makes her go insane.


 * The curse can be broken (idk how) it is also passed down from parents to kits. So Talon's kits will have it, but they can break it (SOMEHOW). Creek also has this curse, but it's less strong in him, so instead of killing cats, he just becomes very aggressive and may harm others, but he's pretty good at controlling himself. So like Talon, Creeks kids will also have, but they can break it. I'm also thinking that the curse can be more or less powerful with the cats desires and ambitions. Talonfang is way more ambitious then Creekfrost, and has much higher desires, so the curse is more powerful in her than in him.

So there's my plot for her. I need a little bit of help for it. She needs a boyfriend and cats open to being killed (cats outside and inside FC all count)

So give me a message or comment below if you want to help out!

02:34, February 11, 2017 (UTC)